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:iconrace-of-aleria:

Please excuse me while I go and curl up and die in a corner.

I'll add in proper comments and crap tomorrow.


Also, a note on the notes (pun intended, lol)- It's a bit hard to portray, but the note Kael got actually says something closer to 'what's your drive', or 'what inspires you', but the pronounciation tics she used implies actual fighting, which switched the meaning to the more literal 'what do you fight for'. Which also unfortunately, makes Kael's answer sound kind of odd, grammatically.


Animation/Flash work/Artwork (c) ~Nyla-Silverlyth (aka me o3o)
Tyger (c) ~Tigersaurusrex
RoA (c) ~SnowTheWolf and ~Chamfruit
Music (c) Freeplay Music ('A Strong Desire to Succeed')
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:iconwingedcatdusk:
WingedCatDusk Featured By Owner Sep 25, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
ASDFQWERTYYLDAKJVNALKJDOMMMGGGGGG. That.Was. AMAZING. I wish you luuuuuck! Sosososososoawesoooome. So much awesome. Awesome everywhere.
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Nyla-Silverlyth Featured By Owner Oct 3, 2011
Pssssh, I totally ended up rushing it.

But thank you. OTL
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Tigersaurusrex Featured By Owner Sep 25, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Wow. That was awesome. I really liked the addition of music. If I move on, I think I'll be adding some music to my rounds.

you really got Tyger's personality down great. I love the way Kael talks in broken Regit. It's adorable. "I not badly towards you." x3 aawww. I liked the story too. Having a transporter on a bug was a really cool idea. And this has been said before, I think, but the animation was very smooth.

Just some technical notes, if you win and you want to make a flash next round, I have a couple suggestions. When you make an animation, create a movie clip and animate in there, and then put the clip on the frame. That way, if the person reading wants to go back a frame, they don't have to go back through all the frames of animation, they'll just be sent right back to the last "panel." It also helps if you want to have two separate animations on one "panel" or a looping animation. Also although I absolutely loved the music, people might want to listen to something else or might be in the middle of watching a movie or something while reading your entry, so a pause/mute button for the music would be nice.

All in all, good job. I think either of us could win. I'm nervous to see the results now. :\ but we'll see!
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Nyla-Silverlyth Featured By Owner Oct 3, 2011
TEXTWALL.

*Cough*

I mean, thank you very much. |D Yeah, this is my first time doing any sort of flash thing with real Actionscript, so I didn't really know what I was doing. Your tips and tutorial links helped a lot though! (You should probably be facepalming about that right about now. XDD) If I have time, and the judges aren't looking, I think I'll try what you suggested.

Anyway, again, thank you very much. <3 May the best... Er, maybe not Flash-er, that wouldn't give me much of a chance... Let's say, may the best contestant win? |'D
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TheLupineOne Featured By Owner Sep 25, 2011  Student General Artist
We have a pulse! This battle between you and Tyger will be so so so so close! :D
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Nyla-Silverlyth Featured By Owner Oct 3, 2011
LOL, I wish.

But hey, faith, right? |D Thank you~
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:iconthelupineone:
TheLupineOne Featured By Owner Oct 3, 2011  Student General Artist
Good luck!
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Ramvling Featured By Owner Sep 24, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
=D Congrats on finishing and best of luck comrade!
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Nyla-Silverlyth Featured By Owner Oct 3, 2011
Thank you, thank you~ :bow: I'm not sure it'll be much of a contest, but i had fun making this.
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ReverendAspen Featured By Owner Sep 24, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
I just got done commenting on Skype, but I must say again that I really enjoyed this. The dialogue was fun and interesting, the animated segments were very smooth, and the idea of the teleporter being ON A BUG... pretty cool idea. ^^

But... guilt. DX That is all.
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